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Q & Q: Chapter Three


 
Chapter Three

Several days later, Linda was sitting on the front porch with a worried look on her face.  She rested her chin in her hands and stared into the horizon.

Walter came running over the field and bounded up onto her porch.

ā€œHey, Linda!ā€ he called a greeting.  ā€œHow is Quillbur?ā€  Then he saw Linda’s worried face.  ā€œWhat’s the matter?ā€ he asked.

Linda held up a single quill in her hands, showing it to Walter.  ā€œQuillbur is losing his quills,ā€ she said, sadly.

Walter took the quill from Linda and examined it carefully.  Then he handed it back to her.  ā€œWait here,ā€ he instructed.  With a single leap, he jumped off the porch.  Then he ran back across the fields toward his own house.

A few minutes later, Walter returned, panting and out of breath.  He carried a small toy doctor’s kit with him.

ā€œWhen I grow up,ā€ Walter said, huffing and puffing.  ā€œI am going to be a doctor.  I don’t know if I will be an animal doctor or a people doctor yet.  Maybe I will be both.  But I am happy to look at Quillbur if you want.ā€

Linda took Walter inside, and then she coaxed Quillbur from his shoe box.  Walter gulped when he saw Quillbur.  Quillbur’s quill did look a little thin, and there were more loose quills laying around the shoebox.  It looked serious.

Walter opened his doctor kit.  He tried to hold his toy stethoscope against Quillbur’s heart, but Quillbur rolled himself into a ball.  Walter waited and waited.  Finally Quillbur unrolled, and Walter listened to his heartbeat.  Then Walter looked into Quillbur’s eyes and ears.

Linda waited while Walter examined her pet.  She hoped there was nothing wrong with Quillbur.

At last, Walter cleared his throat.  ā€œI’m going to go home and look in my books,ā€ Walter said.  ā€œI don’t have many patients who are hedgehogs…so I need to consult with my colleagues.ā€

Linda opened her eyes wide.  ā€œWhat’s a colleague?ā€ she asked.

Walter wasn’t sure so he said, ā€œa colleague is something a doctor consults.ā€

ā€œOh, I see,ā€ Linda said.  She lay down on her stomach so she could see Quillbur’s face better.  ā€œWhat do you THINK is wrong with Quillbur?ā€

ā€œIt could be a number of things, but I hope it isn’t phinaly pharpis,ā€ Walter said, gravely.

ā€œPhinaly pharpis!ā€ exclaimed Linda.  Whatever-that-was sounded awful.  ā€œWhat is phinaly pharpis?ā€

Walter lowered his voice to a whisper.  ā€œPhinaly pharpis is a terrible disease,ā€ he told Linda.  ā€œSeveral animals can get it – even dolphins.ā€

ā€œDolphins!ā€ Linda exclaimed.

ā€œI will have to do some research,ā€ Walter decided.  ā€œMay I take one of his quills with me?ā€

Linda nodded.  She handed Walter a quill and watched him walk to the door.

Then Linda carefully picked up her beloved Quillbur.  ā€œPlease get better soon,ā€ she whispered.

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