Horses milled in
the front courtyard of the castle.
Grooms darted about, scraping cakes of sweat from horse hide and combing
burrs and brambles from manes and tails.
Others carried water and food to the horses. It looked as if every one of them had faced a
hard ride.
Detlef slipped to
the ground. The front door of the castle
was open, and he could see men gathered inside.
Matthias brought
his horse alongside and reached for Timothy’s reins. “Go ahead, little brother. I’ll see that he’s cared for.”
Too distracted to
marvel over his brother’s unusual kindness, Detlef handed his reins over and
jogged toward the castle.
His eyes adjusted
to the darker room. The king stood by a
table moving pawns on a map. A group of
men stood around him, taking part in a discussion. Others lingered in various positions of
repose around the outskirts of the room.
Detlef pushed his
way toward the center. “Have you found
her?”
The king reached
out and patted his shoulder.
“Unfortunately not, son. Now get
some rest. We’ll need you for the
offensive.” Then he turned his attention
back to the map. “The troops move at
daybreak.”
“Troops? What troops?
We can’t attack!” Detlef’s eyes ran around the group of men and fell on
Emil’s smug face.
“We can and we
will.” Emil’s voice sounded irritatingly
noble and heroic. “I stand with the king
on this. We must rescue the princess.”
Detlef turned to
the king. “Give me more time,” he
pleaded. “I know I can find her.”
“You’ve had 2
days already.”
“But I was
detained during those two days – I didn’t have a chance to search as I had
planned.”
“And neither did
anyone else. No, lad, they have
outsmarted us. Every man here fell into
one of their traps. It is clear that
they do not wish us to find Ilona. The
only option left is to go in and take her by force.” He turned away, facing the wall.
Detlef slammed
his fist on the king’s map. “You can’t
send troops in. Who knows the damage you
might do?”
The king spun
around to face Detlef. Anger showed in
his features, but his eyes welled with tears.
“My daughter has been missing for two days. You cannot tell me to do nothing.”
“Just give me one
more day. Please.”
“I can’t.” The king clenched his hands together and
returned to his map. “We cannot wait any
longer. My forces move out at dawn.”
Emil stepped
forward, resting a supportive hand on the king’s shoulder. “I have sent for my father’s men. When you ride out at dawn, I will be by your
side, your majesty.”
No one saw the
wink he sent Detlef.
Violence never solved anything!
ReplyDeleteOne of the things I received as feedback on this story from the Rooglewood judge was that I needed to develop the king's motives here. They felt that I jumped to his decision to attack without sufficient grounds.
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