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All the King's Horses and All the King's Men

(Encouragement for the writer in the editing phase)


    No, no, no, no!  It's okay!

     It just looks bad.  See these broken pieces?  They are supposed to be like that -- don't cry.

    Do you know why this is good?

     Because this is how you make it better.

     It's a piece of art.  The broken pieces catch the light better.  And you can rearrange them into the most stunning visuals and thrilling patterns.  With the bits like this, we'll make a picture that will take people's breath away.



     That's why we sent our story to the beta readers in the first place, remember?  Here.  Take the  pieces.  It's going to be amazing.  I can't wait to see!

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  1. Skye HoffertSeptember 12, 2017 at 2:48 PM

    Lovely reminder!

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  2. Helena GeorgeSeptember 13, 2017 at 8:54 AM

    I'm in editing, and let me say...AHHHHHH....there is so much to do! But it'll make my story so much better. :) Any bit of encouragement helps!

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    1. Esther Brooksmith (wisdomcreates)September 13, 2017 at 8:31 PM

      It's going to be gorgeous. Keep up the good work and get this masterpiece finished!

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  3. Rebekah D. AuthorSeptember 15, 2017 at 3:11 PM

    This is EXACTLY where I've been for the last several months. Lovely reminder.

    Commenting as part of my challenge: rebekahdevall.wordpress.com/challenge/

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    1. Esther Brooksmith (wisdomcreates)September 16, 2017 at 12:16 PM

      Welcome, Rebekah! I'm glad you stopped by! Keep up the good work -- it's fun seeing your comments everywhere, especially on my own blog!
      And, yes, editing can look horrifying but it really is going to be stunning when it is done.

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