Katie at Whisperings of the Pen is hosting another writing snippets link-up. Here are my recent snippets from BB and Ariana's Island. (Dungeon is under a rewrite and I don't feel like I have anything clever to share from that project yet.) So, without further ado, here are my snippets:
Rab rubbed his
cheek against her knee comfortingly and looked up at her with big eyes that
seemed to say, “Milk will make us feel better.” ~BB
Grimm’s eyes flew open. For a moment, he did not know where he was. Then his eyes landed on the ornate bedpost of the rotting frame he slept on, and he remember that he was banished to a dilapidated mansion in a remote area to care for a shamefully ill master. Grimm groaned and rolled over. ~BB
A chicken stirred in the grasses, settling in for the night. Rab hissed at it. He was beginning to feel irritated with the world. ~BB
“Because we will
die,” Grimm said. “If we are found, we
will all die.” Grimm hated his
position. He hated being forced to hide
away like a leper. But that is where he
was, and there was nothing he could do about it. “Lock him up.” ~BB
Willie buried his
face in his knees and rocked harder, trying to make the sad thoughts go
away. He didn’t like sad thoughts. ~BB
Belle backed away
from the clock. Suddenly, the air felt
ominous and a shiver ran up her spine. That
man knew something. ~BB
Belle tapped her
foot against the solid iron bars, listening to the echoing “ping” it
created. “There is always hope,” she
said, softly. “Even against great odds,
a girl can have hope.” ~BB
Then the little
boy sighed. “Will you play with me?” he
asked. “Everybody’s busy and I’m all by
myself.” ~BB
Newel’s most
painful flashback was a time when he had followed his older brother to a
sword-fighting lesson. Several times, in
between sessions, Alton had glanced curiously at the small boy crouched in the
shadows. Finally, he turned to the boy
and held out a sword.
“Come give it a
try, Newel,” he offered, with an encouraging smile.
Newel stared at
the sword. How often had he longed for
lessons? How often had he wished to earn
that proud look that his brother often received from their father the king? His little heart beat faster at the thought.
But his heart was
beating with fear, too. He did not know
how to use a sword. And that sword
looked frightfully heavy. Newel knew
exactly what would happen. He would try
to swing the sword, and he would make a fool of himself. Everyone would laugh at him. And that would be worse than the constant
ignoring. ~BB
“A fine party,
sire,” said a voice at his elbow.
The duke glanced
to see Dolan, the son of a nobleman. “If only it weren’t spoiled by so many
people,” he said, sourly. He took a sip
of the wine, swishing it through his mouth before he swallowed it. ~BB
Ariana thumbed
through the pages of her journal. It was
full – all the way to the dozen words scrawled in the space under the last
line. Ariana flipped to the first entry.
“I don’t know what to do. God help me!” it read. ~Ariana's Island
“Cochina?” she
called. Far above her, she heard a
piercing falcon call. She shielded her
eyes and searched the skies, but Cochina was too far away to be seen. ~Ariana's Island
But the
squirrel paid her no mind. He flipped
his tail cockily as if daring the falcon to match her speed against his. Boldly, he ran out onto a limb over Ariana’s
head and scolded her again. Tsk. Tsk.
Tsk. ~Ariana's Island
Or maybe it
was part of an evil smuggler’s ship. A
shiver ran down Ariana’s spine as she realized that the board may be associated
with a more sinister source. What if
such a person discovered her island?
It was
unthinkable, and Ariana decided not to think about it. She patted the board. “It wouldn’t be your fault anyway,” she
consoled the piece of wood. “You were
only the boat.” ~Ariana's Island
P.S. Don't forget to enter your short story tomorrow! Read about it here: http://commandedwriter.blogspot.com/2014/04/approaching-anniversary-and-challenge.html
And post the link to your short story in the comments section of my April 12th post
Thanks so much for sharing your snippets! I particularly enjoyed the snips from Ariana's Island. I love her spunk!
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