Princess Taralia of Nephtar

     What shall be done with a beautiful princess of a poor country? Send her to marry a prince from a rich country! With this in mind, Princess Taralia is sent along with Nephtar's ambassador to visit the powerful country of Leramay. Using as many arts as she can muster, it is her job to woo him into a marriage. Her country depends on it.
      Things seem to be going well. To her secret delight, the prince she is sent to win is a handsome, charming, young man. And, while there are numerous other women seeking the same goal, Taralia has the advantage, since she came with her ambassador, of living in the prince's castle in the guest rooms reserved for foreign ambassadors. With such hope in front of her, Taralia and her ambassador find extra business to detain them in Leramay for as long as necessary.
      But the prince disappears as soon as his father arrives home. How can a woman woo a prince who is nowhere to be found? Growing desperate, Taralia begins her own search for the missing prince. Can she find him before he falls in love with someone else?

     Greetings, all! There is a foreign princess who plays one of the side characters in one of my stories. Princess Taralia only appears a few times in the tale, but I thought if I rewrote the story entirely from her perspective this back cover blurb (see italics above) would fit.

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Character Creation by Emily Ann Putzke
My character in Ain’t We Got Fun is Georgiana (Gi) Rowland, the older sister of Bess. Their family is struggling during the Great Depression, so Gi takes off for NYC to make a fortune and help them out. The sisters recount their adventures, joys and heartaches to each other. My co-author, Emily Chapman, and I wrote this story in letter form in January. Our characters are very different people! Here are a 5 things that helped me bring Gi to life, and give her a personality that’s all her own.
1. Give Your Characters Flaws None of us are perfect, so our characters shouldn't be either. Gi is a fun, loyal, light hearted girl with big dreams. But she has a flaw that she struggles with throughout the entire story. Pride. She’s very stubborn, independent, and doesn’t want anything from anybody.
2. Use That Flaw to Stretch and Change Your Character Pride gets Gi in quite a few scrapes. Throughout AWGF, she’s constantly battling with it. Everytime she thi…

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Rooglewood Countdown: 9 1/2 weeks: Why Yours?

Yep, time is picking up speed. Especially since I have other things to keep me busy.
Here is my questions for you today: what makes your story special? In the comments below, I want you to finish this sentence "It's a Snow White story, but..." Did you change the setting? Is Snow White the ugliest in all the land? How did you swap out the elements of your story to make it unique?

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