One of the shadows moved. “Were you just going to chuck it in there with no thought for the poor folks on the other side?” Flip’s voice drawled out. It was a deep voice and it made my heart skip a beat. He moved away from the trees and came to stand in front of me. “Some hard-working fellow is plowing his field and then – whop! Out of nowhere, a poisoned apple flies out and hits him upside the head.” He clucked his tongue reproachfully.
Aww so cute, that's a great idea. I just started mine as well, I am already stuck though.
ReplyDeleteYay, Skye! Hurray for starting!
ReplyDeleteKeeping working on it.
Whenever I am stuck, I usually back up to see if there is something I unconsciously don't like in the part I already wrote. Sometimes a wrong scene or a poorly developed character from a couple pages ago is what is causing me to hit a wall now.
The other reason I get stuck is because I need to go back to the drawing board and do some more brainstorming. But brainstorming can be fun.
Anyway, I am just so excited about the fact that both you and I are working on stories at the same time. Keep up the good work!
Yay! This is great!! Can't wait to read more!
ReplyDeleteI have some unexpected twists throwing themselves into this story and begging to be written. I'm definitely pantsing this one.
ReplyDeletePantsing = flying by the seat of your pants (in abbreviated blogger-writer terminology)