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A Friday Quote: Part 13


     Hello, delightful friends! 

     I am continuing my fun event.  It is called A Friday Quote, and I shall play this game every Friday from August through November.  Here's how it works:

IN THE COMMENTS BELOW:
      Post a quote of something YOU wrote THIS week.
Or
Something you edited this week (of something you previous wrote).

    Don't make the quote too long because I don't want you to spoil your story.  Probably 5 sentences or so would be a good amount.  But that is a guideline and not a rule.

     You don't have to participate every week.  But you can participate any week that you write.

      And it will be so much fun to see everybody's quotes.

     And, for me, it will be a reward for writing this week.  :D

     Enjoy!

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  1. Claws tapered out from the coal stained fingers I had always been careful never to touch.

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  2. It's remarkable how one sentence can be so full of emotion and backstory and imagery and mystery.

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    1. Thank you so much! I overwrote this sentence to death.

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    2. Lol. Well, it came out well in the end. ;)

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