There was a
feeling of tension and destiny as the first fingers of light whispered on the
horizon. Horses whinnied, traces
clinked, and men talked in low tones.
Detlef shivered in the cool morning air as he cinched his saddle in
place. Summer was fading away and autumn
was quick on its heels.
“You can ride
mine.” Matthias stepped up beside him.
“He’s faster than your gray.”
Detlef chuckled
softly. “Thanks. But Timothy and I know each other. It’s better for me to ride him today.”
Matthias scuffed
the ground with his shoe. “I never
thought I would say this to my baby brother…”
He lifted his head, his eyes seeking out Detlef’s in the half
light. “…but I’m proud of you. The way you are standing up for what you
believe, keeping your promises, and pursuing your goals…you might turn out to
be a man after all.”
Horses milled
about and Detlef scanned the horizon, embarrassed by his brother’s praise. The king was mounted; they would be leaving
soon. “You better mount that fast horse
of yours,” Detlef mumbled.
“I will. We’ll be hunting the princess today.” Matthias smacked Detlef’s shoulder and turned
away. “Funny thing…my heart’s not in it
anymore.”
Detlef watched
his brother go. Then he leaned his head
against Timothy’s warm neck. “Ride well
for me today, boy. We’ve got a princess
to save,” he whispered.
Moments later, he
was mounted, as were the other men. He
guided his horse toward the king.
“Foreign
boy!” Emil swung his horse in front of
Timothy. “The tournament stakes have
been raised. What do you say? You and me in a race to the princess!” His blood red bay pranced nervously. “Your horse is the color of a rock. I hope it moves faster than one.”
Detlef’s dark
eyes flashed, and Emil jerked his chin into the air in the acknowledgement of
the challenge.
“Men!” The king’s voice bellowed over the gathered
crowd. “I need not tell you the enormity
of the stakes before you. It is believed
that my daughter is held hostage by a rogue clan, hidden deep in the Great
Forest. Your orders are to secure her at
all costs.” His horse shifted from side
to side.
“May I speak?”
The queen’s voice pierced through the soft gray light that was creeping over
the crowd. In a moment, she was lifted
up onto a garden wall where she could be seen.
“I thank you, men, for seeking to rescue my daughter. For better or worse, we believe the clan is
looking for a husband for Ilona. Be
prepared for tests of character, created by the clan.” Her voice was strong and
clear. “Passing these tests will help
you find my daughter sooner. And may God
be with you!” At the last, her voice
broke and she pressed her hand against her mouth to catch a sob.
The king lifted a
banner over his head. “Gather your
reins, men!” His voice rose to a mighty
shout. “And…CHARGE!”
Horses leapt
into full gallops -- across the fields, so clear and empty, toward the distant
darkness of the Great Forest. The men
spread out in fan formation, wider and wider, preparing to enter the forest as
a wide swath of search and rescue. But
by some design, Emil was racing next to Detlef, only 50 yards to his left.
Detlef lay low
over Timothy’s neck, and the ground flew by, disappearing behind him like water
poured over a rock. Over rolling hills
they raced, until they reached the treeline.
High above them, the tallest branches reflected bright green in the
dawn. “Whoa, boy.” Looking back, Detlef saw Emil several paces
back, also slowing his horse. Emil
shrugged, trying to pass off his defeat.
Detlef held up
two fingers. Two out of three. He won.
And at that
moment, the sun burst over the horizon in his full glory. It lit the fields in gold, and made little
patches of fog shimmer in its brightness.
Far behind, the castle sat atop a hill, surrounded by its gardens and
shrubbery and little orchards. And
scattered across the fields between Detlef and the castle, the fan of men
continued to make its way toward the forest, each man choosing his own pace.
Emil reached the
forest edge, several yards down. He
paused and pointed a finger at Detlef.
“To the princess,” he challenged.
Then he spurred his horse and disappeared into the forest.
I think the challenges and test of character is a great idea! There is no way Emil will pass.
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Yeah, Emil might have been able to fool the king and princess (maybe), but not the Derwalds.
ReplyDeleteI would totally rewrite this story -- same basic storyline but I think I could do a better job of expressing it now
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