I told you a little while back that I had this new, great story brewing. Since then, I worked on it a little bit, just to give myself something to come back to once I finish my other projects. Here are some snippets from it:
The carriage
rattled along, jolting Petura and the Lady of Wenshau over every gully
and log. Petura set her teeth and
wondered why her brothers had not seen fit to maintain the highways. There were two of them, were there not? Shouldnāt they be able to accomplish twice
the work?
Petura looked into the dark eyes, hoping
to find a friend there, but the maid dropped her eyes under Peturaās
stare.
Her moves were not as graceful as Tansyās, and she had a way
of squaring her shoulders that was almost warlike, but she could never be
mistaken for a kitchen drudge or a common peasant girl.
Rilaās lip curled
back in a mixture of scorn and pleasure.
āPractice, my lady,ā she corrected with a measure of pride.
Caleneās smooth hands reached out and
closed around Peturaās. āIām not making
you do this, Petura,ā he said softly.
āIf you donāt want to stay, I will have Lady Estelle take you back to
Preden tomorrow.ā His eyes upturned to
hers with a wistful look. āBut..."
He took a swig of his drink and then glanced at Peturah, seeming to notice her confusion. āIām not a morning person,ā he grumbled, by way of explanation.
Droben pursed his lips ā whether from
disdain or an attempt to not laugh, Peturah was not sure.
āGood morning,
Petura,ā Calene said, a pained look on his face over his brotherās
manners. āHow did you sleep?ā
Peturah lifted
her chin. Her blustery brother did not
scare her. āMy tutors were as competent as
your own, in spite of the different location,ā she retorted.
Droben snorted
and rose from the table as well. āKeep
your eyes open, little sister,ā he murmured, throwing his napkin down and
stalking out of the room.
This looks interesting. I hope we can get more soon! I especially like the one about not being a morning person, finding much about with which to empathize.
ReplyDeleteI am going to have so much fun with that particular character, Kathryn! He is based on a friend of mine who a very strong, unwavering personality. I'm never going to have to wonder what he would do in a particular situation. ;)
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