Thursday, August 27, 2015

Snippet: Hunting

"We’ll be hunting the princess today.”  Matthias smacked Detlef’s shoulder and turned away.  “Funny thing…my heart’s not in it anymore.”


  1. Me, too! I like Matthias' arc in the story, even though he is only a side character.

  2. One of the fascinating things about these snippets is what happens to them when you take them out of context.
    I know who Matthias and Detlef are and why they are hunting the princess and why Matthias' heart isn't in it anymore.
    But when I read just this snippet by itself, my mind spins the tale in a hundred different directions.