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An Arranged Marriage - 16




    The king made most of the guests leave the room, but Detlef and his older brother stayed as Amalia revealed her Derwald identity.

    ā€œI kept my people a secret from you,ā€ Queen Amalia wept.

    The king faltered for a minute and then knelt down, wrapping his arms around her.  ā€œIt never mattered, my love.  It’s you I love, be you peasant or princess.ā€

    ā€œI know you think the Derwalds are a myth, but we are a real as you are…as you see meā€¦ā€  She leaned her head against her husband.  ā€œMy family has always led the clan – my uncle was their king when I left.ā€

    Matthias crossed his arms, his eyes narrowing as he listened.  What he was thinking, Detlef couldn’t guess.

    ā€œI fell in love with you from the first day,ā€ Amalia confessed.  ā€œMy family came to visit me at your castle – secretly (for the Derwalds have learned to travel without detection).  And I convinced them of our love.ā€  She took a deep breath.  ā€œOn the night before our wedding, I slipped away and returned to my forest home.  They held a celebration for me, but made me promise that they would have the honor of choosing the spouse of my firstborn.ā€

    Shock rippled through the room, and the king gripped his wife’s shoulders.

    ā€œWhen I was with them, it seemed so easy.  They were making a great sacrifice to let me go, and it seemed only right to give them a part in our future.  But thenā€¦ā€ she faltered.  ā€œI came back here.  And I was ashamed to say what I had promised.  After all, my baby is your baby, too.  How could I have promised such a thing without you?  And the longer I kept silent, the easier it was to reason it away.  I need not tell you every lie I told myself.  I only beg your forgiveness.ā€

    ā€œThe old spindle woman at Ilona’s naming ceremony?ā€  The pieces began to fall together in the king’s mind.

    Queen Amalia nodded.  ā€œAnd I almost told you then, too.  It has nagged at the back of my mind for sixteen years.  And this week, with our ball to find our own husband for Ilona, I have been so terrified.  Every moment.  So frightened.ā€  She buried her face in Adalbert’s shoulder and cried.  ā€œWhat will they do to her if I have angered them?ā€

    A desperate look came over the king’s face as he held his wife’s grief-stricken form.  

    ā€œThey won’t hurt her.ā€ Detlef addressed the queen.  ā€œSurely you have not been away from them so long as to forget their character.  They will keep their promise.  They only want to find a husband for Ilona.ā€

    Amalia lifted her head, hope rising in her eyes.  ā€œThenā€¦ā€  She grasped the front of her husband’s robe.  ā€œSend the suitors after her.  Please.ā€  Her eyes shifted to Detlef’s face.  ā€œIt just might work to bring her back.ā€


(by Esther Brooksmith)

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  1. That was a quite a secret for the Queen to keep. I love the twist that she knew what was going on the whole time.

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    1. I've kept secrets for a long time, making excuses until the secret became a way of life. At least until something stirs it up again.

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