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     “And who is going to be here in an hundred years to greet her?” Justice murmured.

~SPINDLE
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  1. Emily Ann PutzkeJuly 23, 2015 at 7:42 AM

    This is awesome!! =)

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  2. Esther Brooksmith (wisdomcreates)July 23, 2015 at 1:23 PM

    Only people who know that this is one of my Sleeping Beauty retellings will be able to understand this snippet.

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  3. JackJuly 23, 2015 at 9:30 PM

    Oh dear, that sounds foreboding. I want to know what happens now.

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  4. Esther Brooksmith (wisdomcreates)July 24, 2015 at 5:09 AM

    Me, too, Jack!

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  5. AnonymousJuly 25, 2015 at 6:42 AM

    Oh, wow. I love this snippet. Somehow this one line is wistful, mysterious and foreboding all at once. One of the things that's really troubling me about retelling this tale is how to deal with the one hundred year sleep. That's a long time, and I'm struggling with finding out how to express that and how to make that time pass in the story. I guess I have a ton of brainstorming to do!

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  6. Esther Brooksmith (wisdomcreates)July 26, 2015 at 2:20 PM

    I'm sure there is a way, Ana! But I agree: A hundred years IS a long time.
    How is the ready of your brainstorming coming? Getting excited?

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