Detlef swung his
arms, trying to release the tension. The
fencing tournament was nearly over now. He
unsheathed his sword and turned it in his hand, watching the way the blade flashed
in the light. Only once more must he put
it to the test before he was crowned as victor.
In the ring, Emil and a foreign lord battled for the right to face
Detlef.
Detlef eyed the skilled
way Emil handled his sword. His rival would
be a difficult opponent, and Detlef had more than one reason for wishing to
defeat him. Emil was all smiles and
politeness in front of the princess, but he had been a far different man when
the royal family was out of sight. It
made Detlef’s stomach knot to think of the princess falling for the worthless
flatterer.
Detlef’s eldest
brother, Matthias, jogged by. He scowled
at Detlef. “I would be in the finals
instead of you if that monkey hadn’t cheated.” He shot a look of disgust at his
last opponent, then shifted his gaze back to Detlef, looking him up and
down. “Never did think you were much
good at fencing, baby brother.”
Detlef shrugged
off his brother’s subtle insults. Looking
up, he saw Ilona watching him.
She was the
reason he had made it this far. He did
it for her. And if she got him this far,
maybe she could get him to the end.
Maybe he could still win this thing.
A cheer went up
from the crowd, and Detlef refocused on the ring to see Emil waving his sword
in triumph and the other man leaving the ring in defeat. He took a deep breath and made his way into
the ring where Emil waited for him.
“Need a break
before we start?” Detlef offered.
Emil smirked,
adjusting his grip on his sword. “No
need. I could do this all day.”
“Men!” King
Adalbert’s thunderous voice shouted across the field. “I do not have to remind you of the
rules. Points are given on parries. This contest is based on sword contact, not
flesh contact. The last man holding his
sword wins.”
Beside the ring,
a man held a red flag high in the air.
The crowd held their breath: one second, two seconds. Snap!
The man jerked his flag downward.
The final match began. Detlef
turned to face his foe and saw the look of pending triumph on Emil’s face.
“Your face will
look as latticed as a pie crust when I am done with you.” Emil’s blade flashed in the sunlight.
“I am not afraid
of you.” Detlef shifted his sword in his
hand, ready for the attack. “I would
face the fiercest foe for her sake, and you know it.”
Emil lunged,
slicing his blade against Detlef’s shin.
Detlef felt the flash of pain and the trickle of blood. The crowd protested and Emil backed away with
his hands up. “It was an accident. I thought for sure he would be able to block
that one.”
Detlef clenched
his jaw and charged. Clash! Clang!
Clash! Clang! Emil parried – one, two, three – and then
lost his focus and his balance at the same time. He crashed to the ground, rolling away from
Detlef’s onslaught. But he bounced to
his feet, sword still in hand.
He wiped the
back of his hand against his mouth.
“You’re going down, foreign boy.”
“Not if I can
help it.” Detlef raised his sword and
charged again. Clash! Clang! Clang! He lost track of time as the battle went
on. It was the finest set of fencing
Detlef had ever accomplished. And it was
all for her. Clash! Clang!
Clang!
Suddenly,
without warning, Emil pulled a clever move, and Detlef felt his sword wrenched
from his hand. He lunged after it. But it tumbled out of reach, and Detlef felt
Emil’s sword rest against his throat. He
was defeated.
The crowd
cheered. The noise pounded around
Detlef’s ears…and faded as he searched for her face. Would she be cheering as well?
But, no.
Her eyes were on him, and there was no cheer on her lips. He saw his own pain mirrored in her face. His heart leapt up to meet hers.
A servant interposed his bulk in front of
Detlef. “Your leg looks bad, your
highness. May I summon the physicians?”
Detlef blinked at the servant,
reluctant to trade Ilona’s face for the friendly pock-marked one, and then
stared at his leg. “Yes. Thank you.” Then he looked again for
Ilona. But she was standing by her papa, smiling, and placing the
winner’s laurel on Emil’s wavy blonde hair.
(by Esther Brooksmith)
I was hoping he would win, especially since Emil wasn't fighting fair.
ReplyDeleteI know. I always feel a little disappointed for Detlef. But life isn't always fair. And Emil actually is the more skilled swordsman -- even if he's a rotten one.
DeleteThank you, Chloe!
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