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    Hatach, the young scribe, was summoned again the following day to read to the princess.  If he had known how little she listened, he would have given up as soon as he started.  He, however, was blissfully unaware of her distracted state of mind and read heartily along in the selected story.

     The princess could not get the dungeon out of her mind.  It drew her with some inexplicable force.  She tried to reason it out, to uncover her reason behind this interest, but she gave up.  It simply had to be.  She had to see her own dungeon for herself.  She had to see what it was like, if it was real, and who it was that lived there.

     That evening, the princess had her dinner with the king and queen.  The banquet table was set with gold-rimmed plates and gold goblets.  The very finest meal to be found in all the kingdom was served to the royal family.  The princess could not help but wonder if there were prisoners far below her feet at that very moment.  She wondered what sort of meal they were eating.  Perhaps they roasted rats.

     ā€œFather,ā€ she said, suddenly, interrupting her parents’ debate over the best age of duck for the finest meat.

     ā€œNo, no, I am quite certain that duck should be harvested at one year of age,ā€ the king answered his wife.

     ā€œFather,ā€ the princess called again.

     Her father blinked a couple times and stared at her.  He had quite forgotten she was there.  ā€œOh, yes,ā€ he muttered.  ā€œWell, you’ve been very quiet this evening.ā€  He took another bite of his duck, which must have been at least 2 weeks too old for harvesting, and waited for her to continue.

     ā€œHave we a dungeon?ā€ she asked.

     The king coughed in surprise.  That was the last question he expected to hear from his daughter.

     ā€œA dungeon?ā€ gasped her mother.  ā€œWhat brought that to mind?ā€

     ā€œHave we?ā€ the princess repeated.

     ā€œThat is an interesting question to be coming from a young lady,ā€ the queen reprimanded primly, raising one eyebrow.

     The king cleared his throat.  ā€œYes, well, she has a bit of her father’s blood in her as well and cannot help but be a bit curious-minded,ā€ he reasoned.  ā€œHowever, you had best listen to your mother and put all thoughts of dungeons out of your head.ā€

     ā€œWho do we have in our dungeon?ā€ the princess asked.

     ā€œCriminals, traitors, the worst sort of men,ā€ her father began to explain.

     ā€œPardon me for interrupting,ā€ the queen interjected, ā€œbut this is hardly a discussion for the dinner table.ā€

     ā€œDo you visit the dungeon often?ā€ the princess queried.

     ā€œCertainly not!  A dungeon is no place for a man of royal blood.  We live in peaceful times.  I haven’t been down there for fifteen or more years,ā€ the king answered.  ā€œOxstan, chief of the palace guards, keeps track of those sorts of things.ā€

     The queen took another bite of the roasted duck.  ā€œPerhaps a different sauce would make the duck more to your liking,ā€ she suggested.

     ā€œNo, no, no,ā€ the king disagreed.  ā€œIt is most certainly a harvesting error.ā€

     And that is all that the young princess was able to get out of her parents on the subject of the mysterious dungeon.

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