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     Detlef stepped back from the tree and blinked, half-expecting her to disappear.  But she still stood there.  “Hello,” he called gently.
                                                                                                                        ~AAM
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  2. I was wondering, are your Sleeping Beauty stories going to be avaliable for reading even if they aren't accepted into the contest? Cuz they all sound really interesting!! Plus I am a sucker for Fairytale re-tellings!!

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  3. You know, I hadn't given it a lot of thought. But maybe! You would have to wait until after the contest is announced next year, though, just in case one of them wins. But if people are still interested at that point... :) It's a neat idea.

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  4. Good!! Because I would LOVE to read all three!!!

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  5. Every snippet you share makes me want to read this even more!! So good, Esther! =)

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    1. You know what's funny? It does the same thing for me!
      I am SO looking forward to next year's collection!!!

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